Mmmmmmm Lays

        In order to write this draft I had to do exhausting research: eating potato chips. I then gathered information about the four different brands of chips. The overall taste, texture, bag design, and smell were among the categories observed.
        I had to think about this draft for a while. I wanted to make sure the type of comparison was consistent throughout my entire paper. I chose to use subject-by-subject. I used this method of comparison because it seemed most effective for the way I write. I am not a big fan of planning my papers on paper, but for this one i had to, so it took a little longer to start than normal. It was very easy to write this draft; every idea that I had came to me without much thought. My introduction was written first, but then later revised to what it is now. My title came last. When I come up with titles I usually pick a phrase or an idea that is clear in my paper; so it kind of gives the reader the: "Oh that's where the title comes from" moment. As I worked on my draft I really enjoyed the comical lines that I wrote." These chips are for those who don’t care at all about their health or are giving themselves a so called “treat” for working out for five minutes."
       Basically, I was very pleased with  myself that i was able to direct a potato chip comparison paper to the types of eating habits people have."There are the health freaks, the “I want to be healthy” people, the ones who think they are eating healthy. And finally, the ones who just don’t give a damn." It seemed to make it a little more interesting to not only read the paper, but to write it.
        When I read my draft today I was reminded about one of my techniques I used in the draft. I chose to be humorous in my draft and got a few chuckles out of my own writing. Some changes do need to be made. I feel like have to expand on the guts of the paper and add some more sensory details. The feedback I received was very helpful. The biggest point was the changes i need to make in my intro. My opening question needs to be more interesting and maybe make it a little longer."How different can four potato chips be?" I need to make revisions in every paragraph. Most of them will just need to be made longer using more detail. I don't believe that I need to re-word anything with the exception of my opening question. That needs to somehow be a little more interesting.

The Perfect Chip for You

Tyler VanLandingahm

How different can four potato chips be? Well, it depends on what kind of eater you are. See, eaters are classified into four categories. There are the health freaks, the “I want to be healthy” people, the ones who think they are eating healthy. And finally, the ones who just don’t give a damn. It’s actually kind of funny because Lays makes a bag of potato chips for each one of those eaters. Who knows, maybe this is planned.

        
Lays makes a classic bag of potato chips which is just the old fashioned concoction of grease, salt, and fat (in that order). These chips are for those who don’t care at all about their health or are giving themselves a so called “treat” for working out for five minutes. Anyways a big slogan of the Lays Company is “Betcha can’t eat just one.” I stand by that statement 100 percent. Every time I have eaten one chip I had to eat another. They just taste so good. It has to be some chemical that the company puts in the chips. Don’t quote me on that though.

         
In addition to the classic brand, Lays makes its counterpart, the “light” chip. This once delectable slice of potato was de-tastified into half the fat and calories of the classic brand. I swear I thought I was going to through up when I put this piece of tasteless mush into my mouth. The health freaks are absolutely nuts. How could you force yourself to eat this garbage? The Lays “Light” chip is the only flaw in the “Betcha can’t eat just one” slogan. When you eat one of these you are wishing you ate none.

        
My personal favorite Lays chip is their Baked series. This delicious crisp has a more formal flavor. It’s more business like than the classic brand. The alternate way of cooking these crisps makes the flavor. Instead of frying the potato slices, they get baked in an oven. This type of chips is obviously crispier than the other brands, and healthier. The Baked chips are perfect for those who want that same great taste, but a little on the healthier side.

     
The Lays Naturals are the newest addition to the crew. This brand boasts completely all natural ingredients, which includes sea salt. These chips look a lot more like the natural potato that they were made from and not as crispy as the other brands. I really enjoyed this brand until I say that they were just as bad for you as the classic type. At least when you eat the Lays Naturals you can think you are eating healthier when you really aren’t. Who knew that at this day and age we could play reverse psychology with potato chips!

        
All in all, the Lays founders are brilliant in having a brand of chip for every kind of eater. This not only maximizes revenue, but also makes them look smart when you finally realize what they are up to. Each brand has a distinct look and taste that either makes or breaks the chip. The slogan stays true for about 75 percent of the time. Once you’ve found a flavor you like, the bag will be gone in minutes.